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[NG Level Icon Maker]

Glitch

Hi great ame but i found a glitch when you get the bonus object guitar then you lose all of your currect bonus objects.

[GunRun]

Great!

Great game and i love the animations, its very fun but needs more weapons (maybe) and a couple more enimies

[Tycoon Game Tutorial]

nice

Well its not the BEST tycoon tutorial......well actully its the only tycoon tutorial out there..

[This is the Only Level]

yay

yay i beat it very clever and nice coding skills it was fun!!!

[Platformer Tutorial]

Great, but plz help!

Hey dude its a great tut but i did everything you said and looked over it like 30 times and my guy keeps falling through the floor!! Pleas help

[spaceship game tutorial]

Great, but you missed a spot.

This is one of the best flash tutorials i have ever used, im new to flash. I was having problems with it at first, because i noticed you missed somthing. in the times where you use like

onClipEvent(enterFrame) {
if(this.hitTest(_root.fish.fishedit)) {
_root.fish. _y -= -15;
}

You missed a } at the end so it should be

onClipEvent(enterFrame) {
if(this.hitTest(_root.fish.fishedit)) {
_root.fish. _y -= -15;
}
}

It may be different for you cause you have a mac but in later tutorials please remember to put that } at the end because i was frustrated at that lol. but great job. oh and all you people that are having the problem with the repeating bullets, put an extra } at the end of the code. Great work, all of the 5 monmths you went through was worth it man You have my 10 star rating and 5 star vote.

trekopep responds:

Hmmm...

I looked at all the codes and couldn't find any that were missing a }. I DID find one missing a {, and I should probably fix it. If any }s are missing, it's probably because a line got cut off on certain people's computers or something. Anyway, thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked it! I should probably make another tutorial, since I know so much more now. :D